Englisch Gramatik, nur kurz überfliegen ob das ok

hallo,
es wäre super lieb, wenn einer mal schnell hier drüber fliegen könnte und mir bescheid geben kann, dass ich das so in der schule abgeben kann, oder obs nicht so gut ist!
danke schön :smile:

No. 1.) Bibliography
I have read the novel “Give a Boy a Gun “, which is written by Morton Rhue.
It is puplish in 2000 and the publisher is Simon & Schusters Children’s Publishing
Division, New York.

No. 2.) General information about the book
The book ”Give a Boy a Gun” is about two boys, who are being bullied by the
Football players and start someday a school rampage.
“Give a Boy a Gun” is a book for young adults.
Morton Rhue used to like to write books for young adults, because it was not
necessary to write about to deal with murder, adultery, and vavious other immoral
or criminal activities. But nowadays such themes are up-to-date.
Brutality and criminality are growing.
And that’s one of the reason why Morton Rhue write the book.
He writes about a school rampage.
An other inspiration for the author are the school rampage in Columbine.
Two pupils (17 years old and 18 years old) start in april 1999 at the Columbine
High School a school rampage.
They kill 12 pupil, one teacher, hurt 24 other and then they kill themselves.
It is not the first school rampage but the brutalst.
The school rampage at the Columbine High School are the symbol for shooting at schools.

No. 3.) Author’s biography

Morton Rhue is born on 5th May 1950 in New York.
He study literature and works as a journalist, before he becomes an author.
By the way he is an avid tennis player, skier and surfer.
Morton is an author, who writes books for young adults.
His wife called Pamela Older and the both have two kids.
They live together in New York.
Rhue’s amous books are: The Wave, Asphalt Tribe and Boot Camp.
Morton Rhue is just his pen name (pseudonym) in Germany.
His real name is Todd Strasser. The pen name is a wordplay, because Todd sounds
in German like “Tod” and in French means that “Mort”.

Strasser sounds in German like “Straße” and “Strasse” that means in Frenche “Rue”.
Strasser is the same. The result is Mort Rue and with a little bit
American accent = Morton Rhue.

No. 4.) Short summary

The story is about Gary Searle and Brendan Lawlor. They are both the same age
and go to the Middleton High School. Gary and Brendan are outsiders
and build a group belong Ryan and Allison. In that case they are tease by the
footballplayers (the jocks) everyday, especially by Sam Flach.
Ever and anon Gary becomes unhappy and depressed and Brendan changes, too.
He becomes angry and aggressive. So they plan to stop the jocks, because they
have enough. This guys breaking the rules and beating other, but no ihne tried
to stop them. Therefore they decide to go to the dance, beweaponed by guns.
After that they surprise the people and shackle them. Now they can take revenge
and Brendan shot Sam in the kneecap. Its overmuch for Gary, that’s why he
kills himself. The people on the floor use the option to attack Brendan.
In this way, he lose his gun and the jocks hit and kick him until he is unconscious.

No. 1.) Bibliography
I have read the novel “Give a Boy a Gun “, which is written
by Morton Rhue.

which was written
oder
the novel … written by MR

It is puplish in 2000

It was published in

and the publisher is Simon & Schusters

by Simon & Schuster…

Children’s Publishing
Division, New York.

No. 2.) General information about the book
The book ”Give a Boy a Gun” is about two boys,

no comma

who are being
bullied by the
Football players

football

and start someday a school rampage.

?? go on a rampage in the school ?? (sollte dies gemeint sein)

“Give a Boy a Gun” is a book for young adults.
Morton Rhue used to like to write

used to like writing

books for young adults,
because it was not
necessary to write about to deal with murder, adultery, and
vavious various other immoral
or criminal activities.

or:
it was not nec. to deal with murder, adultery …

But nowadays such themes are
up-to-date.

are topical.

Brutality and criminality are growing.

criminal activities

And that’s one of the reason why Morton Rhue write the book.

wrote

He writes about a school rampage.
An other

Another

inspiration for the author are the school rampage in
Columbine.

was the school …

Two pupils (17 years old and 18 years old) start in april 1999
at the Columbine
High School a school rampage.

… started a school rampage in April 1999 at the C.H.S.

They kill 12 pupil,

killed 12 pupils
or: students

one teacher, hurt 24 other

others

and then they:kill

killed themselves.

It is not the first school rampage but the brutalst.

most brutal one

The school rampage at the Columbine High School are

is

the symbol
for shooting at schools.

No. 3.) Author’s biography

Morton Rhue is born on 5th May 1950 in New York.

was born on 5 May 1950

He study

studied

literature and works

worked

as a journalist, before he
becomes

became

an author.
By the way he is an avid tennis player, skier and surfer.

By the way? what do you mean?

Morton is an author,

It is impolite to call the author by his first name.

who writes books for young adults.
His wife called Pamela Older and the both have two kids.

His wife is called P.O. and they have two children.

They live together in New York.
Rhue’s amous

famous? books are:/
R. best known books are:

The Wave, Asphalt Tribe and Boot Camp.
Morton Rhue is just his pen name (pseudonym) in Germany.
His real name is Todd Strasser. The pen name is a wordplay,
because Todd sounds
in German like “Tod” and in French means that “Mort”.

and that is „mort“ in French.

Strasser sounds in German like “Straße” and “Strasse” that
means in Frenche “Rue”.

It doesn’t mean „rue“ in French, it is „rue“ in French, which means „street“.

Strasser is the same. The result is Mort Rue and with a little
bit
American accent = Morton Rhue.

with the hint of an American accent

No. 4.) Short summary

The story is about Gary Searle and Brendan Lawlor. They are
both the same age
and go to the Middleton High School. Gary and Brendan are
outsiders
and build

?? form ??

a group belong

??belonging?? to Ryan and Allison.

In that case

?? „in diesem Fall“??

they
are tease

are teased
;by the

footballplayers

football players

(the jocks) everyday, especially by Sam Flach.
Ever and anon

?? After a while ??

Gary becomes unhappy and depressed and Brendan
changes, too.
He becomes angry and aggressive. So they plan to stop the
jocks, because they
have enough. This guys

These guys

breaking

break the rules and beating other,
and beat up others

but no ihne tried
to stop them.

??no one tried

Therefore they decide to go to the dance,
beweaponed by guns.

armed with guns

After that they surprise the people and shackle them.

?? and tie them up ??

Now they
can take revenge
and Brendan shot Sam in the kneecap.

shoots

Its overmuch for Gary,

This is too much for G.

that’s why he
kills himself. The people on the floor use the option to
attack Brendan.
In this way, he lose his gun

he loses

and the jocks hit and kick him
until he is unconscious.

?? —> I am not sure what you wanted to say, so I am guessing.

Sangoma