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#1

Hallo, könntet ihr bitte meinen englischen Text auf Grammatik und korrekten Kontext überprüfen. Ich werde für jeden Ratschlag dankbar.

The view remind me a bit of a certain panorama platform on a hill in San Francisco where I passed over 2 years ago.:upside_down_face:i think the location might be somewhere in South America too.

In the last years the German chancellor partipated to such an event in remembrance of the victims of the war. Due to the krim conflict and political power games, our relationship is getting unfortunately colder.

What is special on these Russian holidays? Are there any parade? Special food on these days?

I still have one week free. :wink::cherry_blossom::dancer:

#2

Hallo Neila,

zwar bin ich nicht perfekt in englisch, aber ich versuche einmal mein bestes:

  1. Es müsste Parades heissen, da Plural.
  2. Letzter Satz: I’m still off work for a week, oder One week of vacation left.
  3. The view reminds me a bit …
  4. I think I wird gross geschrieben.
  5. … in South America as well oder also würde ich nehmen.
  6. Any special food on these days?

Ich hoffe es hilft Dir weiter.

Dietrich

#3

Hallo Neila,
hier mal meine Variante:

The view reminds me a bit of a certain panorama platform on a hill in San Francisco that I visited over 2 years ago. I think the location could also be somewhere in South America.

In the last years the German chancellor participated in such an event in memory of the victims of the war. Due to the Krim conflict and political power games, our relationship unfortunately is getting colder.

What is special about these Russian holidays? Are there any parades? Special food on these days?

I still have one week off.